Wow, your Dad sounds super cool, That mention of saving mum from drowning sounds scary but great that he saved her. I beat it's great to have him on those scary rides. Your post is really colourful and you've included lots of details in three short stories. I hoped you've shared this with your Dad so he can see you great work.
Looking forward to seeing more of your posts, I'll see you in the comments. Daniel :)
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Hey Zayden,
ReplyDeleteWow, your Dad sounds super cool, That mention of saving mum from drowning sounds scary but great that he saved her. I beat it's great to have him on those scary rides. Your post is really colourful and you've included lots of details in three short stories. I hoped you've shared this with your Dad so he can see you great work.
Looking forward to seeing more of your posts, I'll see you in the comments.
Daniel :)