HI Zayden, I like that you have shared some of your writing, however I wasn't able to read it as it was too small. What you could do is maybe read it to us, or make it bigger.
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HI Zayden, I like that you have shared some of your writing, however I wasn't able to read it as it was too small.
ReplyDeleteWhat you could do is maybe read it to us, or make it bigger.
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Miss Matthews.
ok and happy birthday
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