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Sons of Ma'afu

Once there were two boys on a secret island in Tonga. The island was beautiful, the water was delightfully warm. There were super beautiful palm trees and blazing hot sand that felt like lava. The boys loved to throw their spears at their dad. So one day their Dad died because they keep on getting their spears and throwing them at their Dad like rockets . He was in pain when he went he screamed out loud. The people heard him but they did not know what to do. The Chief Ma’afu had two boys they loved spears they were named after the chief's name Ma’afu. They liked throwing their spears by Ma’afu, their dad. Their dad was really devastated .So one day the people that where there living there they told them to go to the most scariest place and they side that will teach them a lesson. So they walked and walked for maybe 10 minutes or less . They found a place where it was paradise . They found an abandoned place. But it just got abandoned, the power was not off. So they put the spears in a cubbyhole. But they were so sad because they missed their dad . So they went to the city were there dad was but they could not find him. So they searched everywhere but they still couldn't find him. So they heard people doing the Karakia . So they asked them “what is going on?” . They said “your dad died because you kept on hurting him with spears” .But then he stop.So the people went home the person with the biggest tent made a plan with the people . So they tried it . The next morning they rushed out of bed as fast as a cheetah. They went hunting for the two boys and finally they found them . They were wide awake . So the people asked them “why are you sad?” . They responded . “Because our dad passed away” . But they side it is going to be fine dont worry. But the plan was to try and fool them. So actually there dad was not dead . But they did not know that he was alive . So the people went to the dad but there two sons were spying on them so they know that there dad is a live. When they found out they were shocked they did not know what to do . They wailed a few hours for the people to come . But they never reiterated. So they went to the place where the dad was dead but it was real their dad was dead . They knew because they touched him . And they did not know what to do . So a few minutes they got back home . So they were not sad they were mad the people knew that they were mad they claege there knuckles on their hands and straight away there face went red like a volcano as if they were about explode so the people ran but Ma'afu sons ran after the people at then they got them and tied them up on a tree and they were never seen again.                                                              

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