You're poem was really cool, I'd love to hear you recite/sing it so I can hear it how you want it to sound. To me, it sound like it's like a funky rap with a cool beat going through it.
"Jumping on the moon - really smooth like a trampoline - but you're the queen ,with no oxygen - comes a space suit..."
something like that. I'm glad to see that you are enjoying the activities and I hope you keep giving them a go. Remember that you can skip ahead and do any of the tasks in any order.
I hope your holidays are going well and you’re having lots of fun. I see you haven't posted on your blog in a wee while. There’s still plenty of time left to do what you can and get more points for the best chance to get some of the cool prizes that are up for grabs.
I hope you get the chance to check out some of the really fun activities in the SLJ and remember that you can go back or skip ahead to do the tasks in any order you like so you can always start with the most interesting ones first.
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Hey Zayden,
ReplyDeleteYou're poem was really cool, I'd love to hear you recite/sing it so I can hear it how you want it to sound. To me, it sound like it's like a funky rap with a cool beat going through it.
"Jumping on the moon - really smooth
like a trampoline - but you're the queen
,with no oxygen - comes a space suit..."
something like that. I'm glad to see that you are enjoying the activities and I hope you keep giving them a go. Remember that you can skip ahead and do any of the tasks in any order.
See you in the comments.
Daniel :)
Hey Zayden and Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteI hope your holidays are going well and you’re having lots of fun. I see you haven't posted on your blog in a wee while. There’s still plenty of time left to do what you can and get more points for the best chance to get some of the cool prizes that are up for grabs.
I hope you get the chance to check out some of the really fun activities in the SLJ and remember that you can go back or skip ahead to do the tasks in any order you like so you can always start with the most interesting ones first.
Hope to see you in the comments soon.
Daniel :D
Hi Zayden,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing poem!!
I really like how you didn't use complex colours. Your poem is smooth, clear, and straight to the point.
Maybe next time you can use a slide or maybe a different font just to catch the readers eyes.
Overall, this is an outstanding blogpost and can't wait to see more.
See ya later,
Zayden
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