Planet description writing.

There was a luring sound from a unknown planet yet to be discovered.  
Everything from planet earth got lured to the sound. People and animals
eyes would go round and round over and over  till the sound stopped .
Scientist couldn't discover what it was because it could take 48 hours

plus the sound would go  over and over 24 7! .When
some
humans

and animal reached the planet it all went wrong... Missiles

malfunctioned and flew all over the place  and all the humans were
screaming their

lungs off!!. Some people were jumping off the island so they

didn't die in pain .

The missiles stop flying,   double sided palm trees

started growing

people were looking at the palm tree’s and there

were figures in the tree doing the floss . The music

was as loud as a lawnmower that it stop the sound

going   24.7 on planet earth . Everyone was yelping

 for excitement that it's back to normal but the real

question was how are they going to get back on to

planet earth.

Adjectives

Similes   the music was as loud as

Re craft a sentence-light blue. Yelping is refracted word.

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