WALT-persuasive writing
I am a Year 6 student at Park Estate School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Ruma 3 and my teacher is Karli Fee.
Monday, 4 September 2017
zoo debate
I believe that zoo are good for animals because they have breeding centers just incase if there are any animals that only have 6 more left. Extinct is what i just said . Secondly zoos are good because if you wanted to look at a lion you don't have to use all of your money to go to south africa. .If you want to learn about animals some of the zoo keepers at the zoo will tell you because sometimes they have shows of feeding the different spices in fact some of the spices like wetas are nearly extinct in nz because some of the people that find one of them kill it because they think it is gross .Lastly zoos are good because they have food for them so if they hunt in the wild and don”t find any food they will starve to death.
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