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we were doing writing of something floating in the air but we cloud not use plastic bag in our story .

Something mysterious  from kmart was floating up in the sky it floated to a  sewer.  When it was floating, it found its way to the sea. As it floated  it was on the soft sand , it flew  to an island where people were cave men and women. People that are cave men or women don't  know ANYTHING!!  So they looked around it to see what it was they did not know what it was so they put it over their head and smiled at each other because they thought it was funny. After one minute one of them died because they had suffocated. Can you guess what the mysterious item is?

WALT-Use complex sentences in our learning .

maths week 4

Te Reo

WALT- use kai vocabulary in te reo

maria and charlie

WALT- skim and scan  to find information . this week we read maria and charlie , two of the girls had nothing in common  ,  they  both lived in south Africa .

reycling

Did u know that instead of buying plastic bags  just save them because if you throw them away then u will make the environment disgusting looking. Also they will kill little sea animals like for example seabirds and turtles get  trapped in plastic bags and can die.

The little turtles will get trapped inside the plastic bags when they fly around and float to the soft sand .

Why we need to recycle ?

The little sea birds will die and normal birds will die because 90 percent of them have plastic inside them . Some of the rubbish in new zealand had been buried, they dug a hole and put 2.5 million tonnes of rubbish in it . It will be yuk if some of the builders will find 2.5 million tonnes of rubbish when they are trying to build a house for homeless people.

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       WALT- add detail by using examples and facts